Monday, March 30, 2009

Marriage........


Is there freedom in your marriage?

Or is there bondage bringing woe

Is there freedom in your marriage?

This is what I'd like to know.


For marriage is two people

Each sharing the others respect

Not telling the other how to live or love

Nor giving each other the shove

For each is an individual

With free-will to be such;

Giving and receiving in their talents -

However much.


Having freedom to enjoy at times

What each may like to do;

Pleasing each other by attitude

Being happy for each too.


Standing by each other

When outsiders shoot the tongue

No matter what the cost might be

For freedom you're among.

So, is there freedom in your marriage?

I pray there is today,

For only in marriage's freedom -

Love will be for aye!

3 comments:

  1. Salam
    wat u wrote made me thinking more and more if u can take our freedom in marriage, i try to come again to say thing En shallah, coz i wonna read more ...
    i like wat u wrote
    thankz

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  2. a nice piece and wish many marriages could have such freedom....

    so Ill see you Sat then at 5...cant wait to meet you Lolitta !

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  3. Nuna
    Thanks for the compliment.

    Shahrazad
    Great person you are ; thanks for a memorable wonderful evening!

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